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elenya ([personal profile] elenya) wrote2006-08-11 09:25 am

The Adventures of Tom and Barard

Title:The Adventures of Tom and Barard
Category: slash.
Rating: NC-17 for sexual content. Contains violence, some references to non-consensual sex, and lots of hurt/comfort. I make no money from these stories, and give grateful thanks to JRR Tolkien for providing us with such a richly imagined world to play in.

Part 3 of the three part inset chapter (Faros/Catos)has now been posted and can be found here. In addition to the betas who have already been thanked, I'd like to thank Elayne for her grammar help on the inset chapter. Remaining mistakes, as always, are mine. If you have enjoyed the whole Tom and Barard adventure, please tell your friends. :)

Inset chapter part 1 can be found here, and part 2 here.

Earlier chapters can be found here

The lovely icon is [livejournal.com profile] trilliah's artwork. Manip by [livejournal.com profile] shoesparks

[identity profile] gamgeefest.livejournal.com 2006-08-11 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know what you were worried about. That was hot! And I know you said there were only three parts to the inset, but I want more!

Watching Catos take charge in picking the guard was fun, as was Faros's impressed reaction. The funeral was touching and so full of detail that I felt I was there. So often, we don't realize how much we're grieving until we're allowed to do so. That was good for Faros to be able to put that part of his life behind him.

Thank you so much for this wonderful story. When I have time, I shall have to go back and reread this story in one go.

And I second Addie. May your muse live on!

[identity profile] elenya54.livejournal.com 2006-08-11 07:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know what you were worried about. That was hot!

Ah, but that was the redrafted version. :D All praise to betas...

Watching Catos take charge in picking the guard was fun, as was Faros's impressed reaction.

Faros's reaction was very spontaneous. :D I hadn't planned that at all, although I did want the readers to see how mature and capable Catos now was.

I love it when people tell me they reread my stories. I hope you enjoy it as much second time around. :)